Thanks for the feedback, and ideasI love the premise - fucking and murdering a quickie to unwind right before a nice relaxing date. Lewis is really hot, and there's so much potential there; I hope you don't kill him off too quickly!
The twins and the burglars were really hot episodes as well, but I had this odd feeling about them; they don't feel like double-kills so much as two separate kills that happen at the same time. Scott didn't have to manipulate people or events, and didn't have any constraints when it came to the murder. He just had two incapacitated guys he killed one after the other in this very methodical fashion. For example, when Scott murdered Adam (ch 5) he manipulated events in a subtle and interesting way and posed the corpse in this brilliantly suggestive manner. Chapter 21 (Michael) was a similarly excellent manipulation of events - that to me felt much more like a true double-kill. Chapters 10, 12, and 18 come really close too.
Even the latest chapter seems like a setup for an interesting double kill to me, it truly feels like Scott is insatiable and unstoppable... To be honest I'm not sure why.
I don't know, I just feel like a double-kill would be a situation where each character has freedom to react to the situation, and contributes to it in some way. Like what about meeting someone who says his boyfriend is into bdsm, so Scott sneaks into their place one night while one of them is tied up and gagged, then murders the top in front of the other, forces the sub to fuck the top, then snuffs him right when he cums and leaves the scene with one still inside the other.
Or what about forcing some arrogant, self-centered jerk to kill his friend right before raping and killing him too?
Or what about a threesome where one person doesn't realize the other's dead before it's too late? Like, one guy is sucking the other off and mistakes his struggles for an orgasm when really he's fighting to breathe?
Or what about Scott going sailing with a rentboy and landing on a small secluded island, where he fucks and murders the rentboy, but realizes the island isn't so secluded after all, and he's forced to silence the kayaker who had just wanted to explore the island?
thanks, had the latest one planned as a two anyway,Excellent story! But please don't feel like your stories will only be appreciated if they have two deaths, ok? The double kill stories are great, but so are many of the others
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