Was a tough one to write, how would Scott get a willing victim after being careful and cleaver. Jotted down some ideas and that was best one came up. Glad you liked it.Wooow, phenomenal work. I think it might be the best so far, especially in attention to detail and pacing.... And choice of victim, ha - "Darren"'s achingly hot.
To be honest, I threw the "willing victim" idea out there more as a challenge than a request... I'm genuinely surprised at how naturally you were able to work it into the scenario.