Future death ideas. The Predator serial killer

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Hi

I'm looking for ideas for deaths on a couple of story lines i'm going to be doing.
But looking for a variety of deaths for them.

I've got two holidays planned for Scott & Adam.

The first one is a gay cruise. So i'm looking for ways they can dispose of some hot passengers.

The second holiday is a road trip in the US and they will be dealing with some guys they come across and then working on an idea where they stumble across a High School/College Wrestling camp. So looking for ways to get rid of campers and camp counselors.

I look forward to your suggestions
 
There are ways to do a neck snap while wrestling, could look accidental.
 
It would be great to see you play around with time and background action. Usually you take a lot of time to savor a kill, and in general that's a great thing to do. But sometimes it helps tantalize the imagination of the audience if you're sparse with details, or even just reference a kill in passing. Also, consider playing around with flashbacks, or skipping past parts of the action. For example, one chapter on the cruise could start like this:

"The door snapped shut with a soft click. Scott yawned and wavered on his feet, he almost couldn't believe how tired he was. He certainly couldn't believe how busy the day had been. For a moment he was glad Adam wasn't back yet, and took the opportunity to collapse on the bed.

First there was that incredibly cute waiter who had served him and Adam breakfast - how many times had he 'casually' mentioned that it was almost the end of his shift? Scott smiled, remembering how the blissful moan as Scott's cock sunk into his tight ass had been muffled by Adam's own rigid shaft. Then there was that slender young Mexican he had met sunbathing by the pool while Adam was exploring the ship, who had taken a week off from UCB to celebrate his 19th birthday. His laughably impractical speedo had failed to contain his erection even before they had gotten to the supply closet. Then there was that pair of bodybuilders from New York Scott had met at the gym - boyfriends, of course - one black, one white. Scott would never forget how bold they had been in the gym shower afterwards, nor how many grins and erections they had prompted from the other men busily pretending not to watch. Scott clenched involuntarily at the memory; the black guy's penis had been huge and thrust like a jackhammer. He knew there had been a few others that day, but he'd been with so many since the start of the cruise that his memories had begun blurring together a bit. He'd remember to check the pictures he had taken on his phone tomorrow, both to remind himself of how sexy they had been and how they died.

Oh yes, they were all dead. The waiter, he remembered, Adam had strangled while he had been sitting back on Scott's dick. He remembered how he had held the waiter's wrists behind his back while Adam's strong hands tightened around his throat, his panicked eyes meeting Scott's in the mirror while Adam's cum dried on his lips. His surprisingly erotic death spasms had been what finally brought Scott to flood his beautiful ass. The Mexican kid, it turned out, had been unable to inhale through his speedo. But perhaps that had been for the best - though his arms and legs had pounded the deck while Scott held him down, his huge tool had not only gotten hard again but had also painted Scott's back with weeks of pent-up seed. Scott had hefted the boy's massive endowment for minutes afterwards while he caught his breath, amazed someone so gifted had claimed to be a virgin. Noticing his own restored erection, Scott lifted the boy's thighs and tilted his hips forward; he couldn't resist taking that too. The body builders were more difficult to recall... but Scott vividly remembered the picture he had taken afterwards of the white one spread-eagled on the bed, the letter opener embedded in his heart still standing proudly to attention from the muscled hulk's left pec.

Scott smiled. As tired as he was, the memories were too good to resist. He opened his phone and started flipping through pictures. Oh yes, there was the black one sprawled out on the bathroom floor, eyes vacantly staring at the shower head as the spray washed the jagged slice in his throat clean. And how could he forget Jeremy, the Norwegian stock broker he had met in the bathhouse at the ship's lowest level? Jeremy had been the highlight of the day. In fact, Scott remembered how..."

And so on, where Jeremy becomes the focus of that chapter. :)

As far as setting goes, you can't get more diverse than a cruise ship. Gyms, observation decks, bars, a mall, water parks, pools, hot tubs, a sun deck, saunas, theaters, aquatic sports, engine rooms, supply closets, life boats, and endless private berths. A gay cruise adds the possibility you'll see a bath house, and a thick layer of sexuality to all of the normal activities and settings. Orgies and creative sexual arrangements could be common, as well as intrigue. Disposing of bodies would be a simple matter of either leaving them in their berths (suspension of disbelief prevents them from smelling), or slipping the bodies over the side at night. I've got more ideas, but it's taken me almost two hours to write even this much... :(
 
small_dot said:
It would be great to see you play around with time and background action. Usually you take a lot of time to savor a kill, and in general that's a great thing to do. But sometimes it helps tantalize the imagination of the audience if you're sparse with details, or even just reference a kill in passing. Also, consider playing around with flashbacks, or skipping past parts of the action. For example, one chapter on the cruise could start like this:

"The door snapped shut with a soft click. Scott yawned and wavered on his feet, he almost couldn't believe how tired he was. He certainly couldn't believe how busy the day had been. For a moment he was glad Adam wasn't back yet, and took the opportunity to collapse on the bed.

First there was that incredibly cute waiter who had served him and Adam breakfast - how many times had he 'casually' mentioned that it was almost the end of his shift? Scott smiled, remembering how the blissful moan as Scott's cock sunk into his tight ass had been muffled by Adam's own rigid shaft. Then there was that slender young Mexican he had met sunbathing by the pool while Adam was exploring the ship, who had taken a week off from UCB to celebrate his 19th birthday. His laughably impractical speedo had failed to contain his erection even before they had gotten to the supply closet. Then there was that pair of bodybuilders from New York Scott had met at the gym - boyfriends, of course - one black, one white. Scott would never forget how bold they had been in the gym shower afterwards, nor how many grins and erections they had prompted from the other men busily pretending not to watch. Scott clenched involuntarily at the memory; the black guy's penis had been huge and thrust like a jackhammer. He knew there had been a few others that day, but he'd been with so many since the start of the cruise that his memories had begun blurring together a bit. He'd remember to check the pictures he had taken on his phone tomorrow, both to remind himself of how sexy they had been and how they died.

Oh yes, they were all dead. The waiter, he remembered, Adam had strangled while he had been sitting back on Scott's dick. He remembered how he had held the waiter's wrists behind his back while Adam's strong hands tightened around his throat, his panicked eyes meeting Scott's in the mirror while Adam's cum dried on his lips. His surprisingly erotic death spasms had been what finally brought Scott to flood his beautiful ass. The Mexican kid, it turned out, had been unable to inhale through his speedo. But perhaps that had been for the best - though his arms and legs had pounded the deck while Scott held him down, his huge tool had not only gotten hard again but had also painted Scott's back with weeks of pent-up seed. Scott had hefted the boy's massive endowment for minutes afterwards while he caught his breath, amazed someone so gifted had claimed to be a virgin. Noticing his own restored erection, Scott lifted the boy's thighs and tilted his hips forward; he couldn't resist taking that too. The body builders were more difficult to recall... but Scott vividly remembered the picture he had taken afterwards of the white one spread-eagled on the bed, the letter opener embedded in his heart still standing proudly to attention from the muscled hulk's left pec.

Scott smiled. As tired as he was, the memories were too good to resist. He opened his phone and started flipping through pictures. Oh yes, there was the black one sprawled out on the bathroom floor, eyes vacantly staring at the shower head as the spray washed the jagged slice in his throat clean. And how could he forget Jeremy, the Norwegian stock broker he had met in the bathhouse at the ship's lowest level? Jeremy had been the highlight of the day. In fact, Scott remembered how..."

And so on, where Jeremy becomes the focus of that chapter. :)

As far as setting goes, you can't get more diverse than a cruise ship. Gyms, observation decks, bars, a mall, water parks, pools, hot tubs, a sun deck, saunas, theaters, aquatic sports, engine rooms, supply closets, life boats, and endless private berths. A gay cruise adds the possibility you'll see a bath house, and a thick layer of sexuality to all of the normal activities and settings. Orgies and creative sexual arrangements could be common, as well as intrigue. Disposing of bodies would be a simple matter of either leaving them in their berths (suspension of disbelief prevents them from smelling), or slipping the bodies over the side at night. I've got more ideas, but it's taken me almost two hours to write even this much... :(
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Appreciate it thanks. It can be time consuming. Some good ideas for the cruise.
Also looking for road trip and the camp ideas if you have any.
Thanks
 
You can always through a dead body into a vat of acid and watch it slowly dissolve. (I hear that really happens is places like Colombia with drug warloads).
 
Well, about the road trip, how about they keep the hottest guy alive till the last, make him watch Scott kills his mates and then gutted and roasted him over the fire or skin him ...
 
As for the road trip, you could have them hitchhiking and killing the hot guys that pick them up. then have two of the guys that picks them up be counselors for the camp, have adam and scott kill them and take their place at the camp. as for killing wrestlers without them knowing, locker rooms and showers are always sure hits. you could have one wrestler knockout his practice mate, then adam and scott double team him and kill him by surprise then kill the other one when he wakes up.

Another case could be two wrestlers that are lovers and wrestle naked at night. as the have sex after wrestling, adam and scott jump them. have one of the wrestlers get his stomach slashed open and have the other wrestler get suffacated in his lovers intestines.

Third case could be that one of the wrestlers is a necrophiliac and accidently kill his sparring partner during a private practice. the wrestler fucks his friend's dead body then gets killed and fucked by adam and scott in return.

if you want more ideas, private message me
 
Not to be single-minded, but I had one more idea for the cruise... It would be fun if Adam and/or Scott struck up relationships with guys that lasted more than one story before the guys are murdered. One example of this could be Scott and Adam disagreeing which of a pair of boyfriends is hotter, then making a game of seducing the one of his choice. After a few chapters of interactions - during which they continue to hunt the other passengers - they reveal, or the boyfriends find out, each other's infidelity. What happens next is whatever you imagine - foursome, jealous fight, possibly even another chapter, maybe one or two deaths...

As for the wrestling camp... I really like the way Rex thinks, but part of me feels there's going to be enough gay sex during the cruise, and the wrestling camp presents a different kind of opportunity. (Besides, it's not like nude oil wrestling can't happen on the cruise... ;-]) I love the idea of posing as counselors and betraying the young athletes' trust, but another great treatment you haven't tried yet would be to frame it like a slasher movie and write it from the victims' perspectives as they're picked off one by one or in pairs.

If the camp is held at a multi-purpose location built for your more typical summer camps, I think it maximizes the possible death opportunities.

- drowning:
* the athletes are warned not to touch the kayaks (possibly the camp isn't insured for them or whatever) but one or two sneak out anyway. Possibly one sneaks his girlfriend into the camp and takes her on a romantic boat ride under the stars.
* a guy is by the coast for a hike, a swim, or possibly even to run away when he's attacked and his head is held underwater
* I still really like the idea where a guy is out swimming and a scuba diving Scott/Adam pull him under and rape him, but that fits much better with the cruise storyline

- poisoning:
* Someone using an outhouse, or an entire dormitory, could be exposed to poison or asphyxiating gas
* one of the guys could have snuck in cocaine, and shares it with two or three friends secretly at night, except Scott switched it out for rat poison
* a few adventurous campers could opt to sleep out under the stars for a night, and a small venomous snake could be introduced to their sleeping bags.

- electrocution:
* high voltage line + door handle = dead camper
* dropping a plug into a hot tub could take care of several campers at once. I fondly remember that time Scott swooped in to murder a guy in a hot tub before his friend came back, but unless they're moving very quickly they can't afford anyone noticing even accidental deaths...

- sharp objects:
* Sexy, sweaty boys in shorts should never be sent to "get something from the toolshed" on their own. And when they don't come back, their friends should also never be sent alone to "see what's taking him so long".
* The camp counselors are angry to discover that not only the kayaks, but also the archery equipment has been tampered with.

- strangling/choking/asphyxiation:
* Two wrestlers heading back to the cabins at night along a dark path. One is frustrated at losing to the other, who he thinks is not as skilled, and he requests a rematch. He succeeds in pinning the other wrestler face down, and doesn't notice the noose/garrote until too late.
* A wrestler who prefers to sleep nude weathers the teasing from his fellow campers, even brags about his pride in his masculinity. He wakes up late at night to find his covers removed, his limbs tied to the bunk bed, his cock erect, and two shadowy figures standing over him. He's gagged, but not particularly well, and can't understand why his groans and thrashing don't wake his cabin-mates until a drop of blood lands on his chest from the bunk above. The shadowy figures play with him as he becomes lightheaded and his cock rises against his will...
 
Forgot to mention: about 1 in 27 adults have a food allergy, the most common one by far being shellfish. This is a bit indirect, but could nevertheless be exploited...

Also, a good example of a murder from the victim's perspective would be chapter 2 of Death in the Rockies. An example of an isolated camp stalked by a murderer would be Dead Boyz Don't Scream. A literary example ofdeep-in-the-woods slasher scenario (for those of you not turned off by furry snuff) would be the excellent The Leatherbody.
 
Argh. Typo. It was supposed to read:

small_dot said:
- strangling/choking/asphyxiation:
* A wrestler who prefers to sleep nude weathers the teasing from his fellow campers, even brags about his pride in his masculinity. He wakes up late at night to find his covers removed, his limbs tied to the bunk bed, a clear plastic bag over his head, and two shadowy figures standing over him. He's gagged, but not particularly well, and can't understand why his groans and thrashing don't wake his cabin-mates until a drop of blood lands on his chest from the bunk above. The shadowy figures play with him as he becomes lightheaded and his cock rises against his will...
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hi! i have another suggest for you, hope you'll like it :)

Scott is now a pool instructor and he wants to teach to an hot guy how to hold his breath more. Scott has to hold the guy underwater, belly-up, with the right hand on the guy's belly and the other around his head, holding his arms raised, the pact is that scott have to let the guy go when he'll do a signal, he does for twice, but the third time he continue holding the guy underwater, scott tickle the guy's armpits and belly more times, he also make the guy rotate in the water to confuse him. when the guy starts to spasm he push his belly and hold his mouth opened to make him drown better. The important is that scott have to make a lot of test to the body, to be sure he is really drowned, and then to leave him underwater, as if it was an accident :)

i'm sure it'll be hot if made of you :)

hope you'll like it

and this is the model i would love to see :) http://www.myspace.com/andreanicotra/photos/albums/le-mie-foto/339661
 
You could have your victim tied up and hanging over a pool of pirhanas. Then cut him loose and he falls in. The fish typically stand still for a moment, checking out the victim, and he knows that. Then suddenly they attack, and leave only a skeleton.
 
anything involving suffocation is awesome, but suffocating with the biceps, arms, forearms, pits, pecs, thighs,legs, calves, crotch, so hot a muscular guy using his muscles to suffocate his victim, and that could also be done 2,3 on 1.
 
While on the road trip you could run into a group of hot sweaty jocks who's car has broken down in the middle of a dessert land. Kill some involving road kill/vehicle torture? Like one of my favorite scenes from Wring Turn 5, where a hot guy gets his arm tied to a truck and his feet to a tree and hes pulled tight and legs broken then his hot body is ran over by the truck.
 
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