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This story is called Bad Brother and it follows twenty young guys on a TV reality show.
Every few days some of the guys will be put up for eviction.
Readers will then get the opportunity to vote for the guy they want to evict and he will then be evicted from the house. The twist is the guy that gets evicted gets killed and doesn’t know what‘s coming. (So hopefully we’ll get some reader interaction.)


Lets meet the housemates.



Jamie 22yo

Jamie is a sensitive student who has a lot of time for his girlfriend. He spends his time with family and friends and prefers evenings with his girlfriend above other things. This is the first thing he’s done without his girlfriend for sometimes.

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Tom 21yo

Tom is a 21 year old student from Birmingham. He loves to spend time with friends and is currently in a relationship. He’s entering the house to have fun and to win.

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Drew 20yo

Drew is a 20 year old university student. He is a party animal who loves to hit the clubs all night, no matter the theme Drew will always get involved. Aside from his wild partying Drew is also an avid rugby player.

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Casey 18yo

Casey is a happy go lucky guy. He likes to have a good time and lives his life to the full. He is a keen football fan and loves to sing. He is the younger brother of Chet who is also in the house.

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Corey 18yo

Corey is an 18 year old stud who is currently a student at his local college. He likes to hang with his mates and is seen as the practical joker of the group. He also likes to keep fit and workout, he is also a keen rugby player.

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Chet 23yo

Chet is a 23 year old stud, he is the typical alpha male and always likes to be the centre of attention. He loves to hang with friends and is a keen football player. He loves to play practical jokes and is very opinionated. He is fiercely loyal and protective of his younger brother Casey who is also in the house.

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Ashley 20yo

Ashley is a 20 year old bad boy. He loves his girlfriend to pieces and, he sees himself as the local bad boy in his area. When not with his girlfriend he’s working on his muscles and by his own admission is pretty vain.

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Zac 19yo

Zac is a part time model and wannabe body builder. He spends most of his spare time working on his hot body. He loves to show off his body and thinks his time in the house will give him more exposure.

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Ollie 23yo

Ollie is a part time model and is also a boxer. He loves his family and his friends and is always up for a good time.

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Luke 19yo

19 year old boxer Luke loves to have a good time. He cares about his looks and money and wants everyone to know how rich he is.

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John 22yo

22 year old grafter John is joining the house to try and make a new start in life. He has plenty of time for his girlfriend and friends and loves to keep fit. He says he gets on with everyone and wants a good time when away.

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Dudley 22yo

Dudley is a 22 year old muscles stud that is up for anything.

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James 22yo

22 year old personal trainer James is also a part time model. He loves his girlfriend and working on his body.

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Greg 21yo

Greg is a full time model who lives every day to the full. He loves to socialise with his friends and is the life and soul of any function.

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Joe 20yo

20 year old Joe is a wannabe body builder and fitness model. He spends his time in the gym with his friends and his brother who is in competition against to see who has the best body.

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Tony 20yo

Tony loves to fool about with his mates but has a serious side when it comes to his girlfriend. His main ambition is to get into modelling and he aims to use his time in the house to showcase himself.

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Austin 18yo

American stud Austin enters the house with an aim to win. He wants to be famous and knows he has a fantastic body for his age. He aims to win at all costs. And had no hesitation in leaving his girlfriend at home to join the house.

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Scott 23yo

Scott loves life, he lives to go out with his friends and doesn’t care what he does. He doesn’t mind what he wears and promises to be fun in the house.

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Chris 23yo

23 year old Chris loves his weekends when he gets the chance to party. This single lad is up for most things and admits he can’t help himself when he’s drunk. An avid football player Chris also likes to keep fit.

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Mark 23yo

American barman Mark is a 23 year old who knows he has a great body. He spends his spare time toning his body and although he gives a bad boy persona he also has a sensitive side.

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Regular updates and pictures from the house will follow.
I hope the readers will enjoy.
 
Awesome idea! I saw a furry version of this in Snuff Manor by felixpath, except all contestants were consensual and knew losing meant death.

Was thinking about another version where the guys trapped in the house were all gay and weren't competing for anything other than staying alive. Every night one of them would be snuffed by their choke collar unless - secret rule - they gained immunity by killing someone else that day. There was a lot more detail but I haven't sat down to write it...
 
Thanks Brian, great idea. Looking forward to read more
 
I actually wouldn't mind a link to that story small_dot? if you have it of course.
 
Day 1 in the House.

The first full day in the house began with housemates finally getting up around 10am. With housemates still getting to know each other talk around the breakfast table was cagey until Zac come up with an idea. With each housemate being told that they needed to be shirtless for 90% of their time in the house, he thought that each guy was put in for how hot their body was.
Cocky 18 year old American stud Austin stood up and boldly told the other housemates it was obvious that he had the best body considering his age and muscle mass. He happily stood up and flexed his young body.

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Other housemates laughed and shook their heads whilst Austin sat down.

Later on in the day housemates were doing their own thing. Chet his younger brother Casey, Scott and Chris were in the garden talking about Austin. They spoke about his arrogant and cocky attitude and how he was a threat. Chet continued to badmouth Austin and assert his own dominance in the house. Casey added that although Austin had a good body he was better looking then the American jock.

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Elsewhere in the house other housemates are discussing themselves and trying to get to know each other. Austin’s actions haven’t gone unnoticed and he is the main talking point.

Austin meanwhile couldn’t care as he continued to work out in the gym and admired his body telling himself how good it looked.

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Joe joined Austin in the house gym, and quietly did his workout. Austin’s actions hadn’t escaped him and he threw the young jock dirty looks as he worked out.

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Fitness model Zac lounged on one of the house sofas and was deep in thought.

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He is joined on the sofas by wannabe and part time models James, Greg, Ollie, Luke and Tony. The conversation soon turns to the male model industry and Zac helpfully offers advice and tips to the new housemates. They soon admire and talk about each others bodies and the work it has taken to get them in this state. The six guys agree that Zac has one of the best bodies in the house and as they discussed this Austin walked into the room. Zac was talking about how he diets to get his body into pristine shape. As the group broke up Luke shouted so Austin could hear “Zac, next time your working out. Lemme know. I want my body to look like yours.”

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Austin made his way to the kitchen and Zac quickly followed. Austin immediately threw up his defence guard and commented on Zac’s body but made sure Zac knew what he meant. Zac couldn’t be bothered to argue and stood in front of the mirror in the kitchen.

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He spoke briefly to Austin and told him that he had a good body but to settle down a bit as they had only been in the house half a day and he was winding people up the wrong way. Zac could see Austin listened and being a sensible guy himself, he began to see Austin as a scared young guy who was using his cockiness as a defensive mechanism.

Elsewhere in the house John was keeping himself to himself for the first day and taking in some rays in the garden.

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Tony walked outside in his red shorts and also decided to tan his body in the sun.

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Chet and Casey joked about with each other and began to play practical jokes on the housemates.

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The two 18 year olds Corey and Casey sat down and got to know each other. They found they had quite a few things in common and started a house sing song.

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Luke relaxed in the house before dinner deep in thought with his sunglasses on.

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Scott walked around in the kitchen preparing dinner, he spoke to himself and approached a hidden camera and pulled a sad face.

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Tom sat and had fish for lunch, no one else wanted any so he had the whole thing for himself, but like a child he dropped some sauce down his top.

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Drew decided to do what most of the other housemates were doing on the first day and grabbed some rays as he got to know people. He spoke about his rugby and his life outside the house.

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James spent the evening working out in the gym to keep his figure up.

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He tried to get Austin to join his routine but American barman Mark took him up on the offer instead.

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Bad boy Ashley oiled his body up before going out into the sun. He had got to know some of the housemates and joined John on the grass.

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Ollie joined the others outside with a drink and joined the group discussion before he and Luke spoke about their natural interest in boxing.

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With the day being beautiful the garden was the place to be and Chet lay down to relax in the sun.

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Not wanting to resist a joke Drew placed his foot under Chet’s nose and left it there before rubbing it around his mouth. The other housemates laughed while Chet had no idea what was happening.

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Jamie had done his mingling for the day and decided to indulge himself with what the house offers. He played about in the pool before having a relax in the sauna.

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Dudley got to know Tom really well and strutted about in a red vest as he showed off his bulging arm muscles.

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Tom changed into a yellow vest after his fish incident and joined Dudley for drinks in the garden. The drinks flowed and he got quite tipsy.

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A quite day from Chris who got to know Chet and Casey better and hit it off with Scott. He took the timeout to talk to others and listened tentatively to the conversations.

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James finished his workout and admired himself in the mirror. He noticed his bulging arm muscles looked fresh.

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Greg’s mellow day ended with him chatting in the garden to other house mates. He didn’t want to peak to early.

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Scott decided to have an early night but before he went to bed he checked himself out in the mirror. As he said to himself “Scott your one sexy bastard. The girls are gonna love you.” Casey walked in mid flow and burst out laughing.

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As the night went on Luke and Ollie had a practice sparring match before Luke who was tired decided to go to bed.

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One by one the housemates headed off to bed and left Corey pondering in the garden. He stared up into the night sky and was determined to do his very best in the house.

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A non eventful first day in the house but the will be more to come.





I will be changing the way the day is presented for Day 2's entry. This way is time consuming and I think writing it like a diary entry will be better and give me more of a chance to showcase the housemates qualities.
 
Great idea! How is the method of execution to be determined? Each of the guys will be killed in different ways, right? I hope the deaths are nice and brutal. :)
 
Yes, each guy will be killed in different ways with the winner meeting his end in a special way. Each method of death will be determined radomly with readers voting which guy is evicted.

Each daily entry will be done on a dairy based entry with new pics of each guy added
 
Day 2

09;30 - Housemates are woken up by big brother. Some shower, whilst others enjoy a chat over breakfast.

10:00 - Zac, James, Ashley, and Joe decide to have a Morning workout in the gym. Zac's positive attitude shines through as Ashley puts on a big man bravado in front of his peers and tries to lift more then them.

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10:30 - Drew and Corey find they have mutual interest in rugby and get to know each other better as the talk goes on.

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12:00 - Bad Brother calls the housemates together for the first task in the house.

12:15 - Bad brother selects Corey to take part in the first task.
The task Corey has to have his whole body waxed.
Corey laughs nervously as Bad brother calls him into one of the task rooms.
With Corey gone Bad Brother explains that to win the task housemates have to guess what Corey's reaction to being waxed will be.

12:45 - Housemates discuss the task before Bad Brother wants an answer. Drew thinks Corey's rugby background will help him see the task through like a man. Whilst Zac thinks he'll scream like a girl.
Bad brother wants an answer and after listening to both arguments the housemates side with Zac and think Corey will act like a girl.

13:00 - Corey sits in the task room. He asks the woman if it will hurt. She looked at him and smiled. The waxing starts on Corey's legs and he continued to ask if it hurts as the woman rubbed the cream all over Corey's strong muscular legs, unaware the housemates are watching his ordeal.
As the woman began to pull the strips off his legs Corey cried out like a girl. As she finished his legs and did his chest Corey's reaction continued still unaware the house were watching.

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Back in the house the housemates watched and the mood was buoyant and they were in stitches after watching Corey on TV.

13:45 - Corey returned to the house, still unaware the housemates watched him. As he sat down Chris asked how it went. Corey told him and the house it was fine. Joe then asked him if it hurt. Corey put on a brave face and told them he didn't feel a thing. Practical joker Scott then mimicked Corey's cry and the penny dropped that they had seen the task and knew how he acted.
Corey burst out laughing an told the housemates the truth. He tool his shirt off and showed them his smooth chest and flawless legs.

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15:00 - Housemates are doing their own thing. Zac continues to get to know Austin whilst Scott and Chet sneer at the American stud.

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16:00 - Austin & Zac do a work out together. Whilst Austin overhears Casey bad mouthing him to James.

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16:15 - Austin confronts Casey an the two square up and have to be broken up by Luke.

17:00 - Chet threatens Austin in the bedroom and tells him of he wants his brother he will have to go through him.

18:00 - Bad brother gets the housemates together and informs them that they correctly guessed Corey's reaction and as an award Bad brother will supply them with alcohol for the evening.

21:00 - Housemates enjoy the evening in the garden drinking the alcohol bad brother provided.
A group of housemates are discussing Chet's behaviour, whilst Drew takes the piss out of Corey for his reaction in the task.

22:00 - Scott shows his tattoos off to Chet and Chris.

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23:30 - Ollie and Tom have drunken frolics in the bedroom.

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Other Highlights from the house
Ashley relaxes outside in his multi coloured boxers.
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Austin watches in amazement as Zac does his workout.
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Casey is still angry after his bust up with Austin
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Chet shows off his toned abs after a discussion with Scott and Chris to see who has the best set.
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Chris takes some down time and relaxes by the pool.
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Drew plays around in the pool and gives a satisfactory thumbs up to one of the static cameras.
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Dudley enjoys his evening beer
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Greg relaxes by the pool, and discusses some of the house events.
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Greg gets a bit carried away with his drink
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James sweats heavily after giving himself a hard work out
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James pulls faces as he enjoys his night in the house.
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Jamie ponders on some of the action he saw in the house today
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Jamie has an early night and goes to bed thinking about his girlfriend
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Joe struts around the house in limited clothing.
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John checks himself out after his daily workout
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John has a bit t much to drink and gives the camera the evils.
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After overhearing Chet going on about his abs. Luke thinks his are better
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Luke gets ready to sunbath by the pool
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Mark continues to watch housemates before speaking to people more
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Ollie checks himself out in the mirror and decides he looks fresh
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Tony looks shy as he drinks his alcohol
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After a bit to much alcohol Tony decides to strip
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Zac shows Austin his nicer side
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Zac shows his body off as he enjoys his alcohol.
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Nominees for Eviction.

This is the readers chance to choose who will be evicted from the house and who will be Bad Brothers first play thing. The other housemates have voted and these are their choices.


Just reply to leave your choice.



1. Casey
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2. Ashley
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3. Tony
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The eviction will take place in a few days.

Make your choice!!!
 
Now it is getting interesting my vote is No 1 Casey
 
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