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Ricky eased his seat back and rubbed one hand on his crotch. He was very, very high and horny as fuck. He wasn’t sure he’d have enough time to jack off, though. Jeff had gotten out of the van a couple of minutes ago—to go take a piss, he’d said.

Probably just beatin’ off, thought Ricky. No telling how soon he’d be back. He and Ricky had banged the same chicks, so Ricky had heard some things. Like how Jeff would shoot his load at the slightest touch when he was super-randy. Either way, he’d be back before Ricky could rub one out.

That was ok, though. Jeff was the one with the weed. And Jeff had cut him in on this gig when he didn’t have to. He was getting a hundred bucks for just sitting here. Well, that and not asking questions. Something weird was going on with this job and high as he was, Ricky was a little nervous.

He’d originally just had his usual Saturday night plans—go get fucked up and try to get laid. That meant finding someone to get him drunk or high—he was nineteen and well-known as a worthless little punk in his little town. Jeff was his best friend and was twenty-one. If he didn’t have any pot, he could always buy the booze, so Ricky went looking for him.

Ricky had dressed to show off his body; anything to help his chances of getting some pussy. He was a country boy so his tight jeans were faded and the ropers they were tucked into were scuffed. His white t-shirt was clean, at least, and was tight enough to highlight his well-developed chest. Ricky earned what little money he made by doing odd jobs on local ranches and physical labor had given him a lean, hard body.

Ricky didn’t own a car. The autumn chill filtered through his denim jacket as he walked into town. The wind had picked up and the baseball cap covering his short brown hair didn’t protect his ears. He felt lucky when Jeff pulled up next to him. Jeff said he needed some help and it would be easy money, so Ricky climbed into the van.

Jeff had been hunting. His tight jeans were also tucked into boots, but they were camouflage patterned combat boots. There was camo pattern on his t-shirt, too, as well as on the cap covering his red-gold hair. He wore a simple brown leather jacket and there was no trace of bright orange anywhere—which meant he’d been on someone else’s land, illegally.

Jeff had said he’d been approached by a couple of guys—strangers--when he’d got back to town. They’d offered him two hundred dollars to transport them and their motorcycles that night. He wanted Ricky’s help loading and unloading the bikes and would pay him half and get him high. Ricky jumped at the offer.

The first part of the gig had gone smoothly enough. They’d each smoked a joint on the way to the pickup spot, which was on an isolated back road in the state park to the north of town. This was where Ricky got a look at the two men.

Both of them had hard, grim faces. They were well built and quiet, almost emotionless. Each was in black, from their tight knit caps to their combat boots. Ricky caught sight of a knife in a boot sheath as he was helping to place a bike in the back of the van and wondered what he’d gotten into.

As they settled into the back beside their bikes, one of the men spoke, issuing orders in a gruff voice. They were to proceed to a specific point to the west and unload the bikes. The men would leave on the bikes while Jeff and Ricky waited. When they returned, the bikes would be placed back in the van and they would be driven back to this spot.

Ricky was worried. These guys looked like commandos. What the fuck was going on? Not that he’d ask—there was something in the cold faces of these men that said questions were a bad idea.

So they’d driven to the point they had been told and stopped at what seemed like random on a dirt road. The men had ridden away and Jeff had rolled more joints. Ricky had gotten high enough to forget his concerns and get horny.

He quickly jerked his hand away from the ridge in his jeans where his hard cock was throbbing—Jeff opened the driver’s door. “C’mon,” he said, “they’re back. I can hear the bikes.”

The two men seemed a bit less tense when they returned. Clearly whatever they had planned had gone well. They remarked that they still had a little “cleaning up” to do and they wanted to get it done with. The drive back to the park was made in silence.

Ricky was relieved when they pulled to a stop and Jeff turned the van off. The thought of money prompted him to speak.
“You dudes need anything else or are you gonna pay us now?”

“No,” replied one of the men over Ricky’s shoulder. He was crouched right behind the passenger seat. The other was similarly poised behind Jeff. “Your job is done. We don’t need you anymore.”

And before Ricky was aware it happened, a nylon cord was whipped around his neck and pulled taut.

In his heavily drugged state, it took Ricky a couple of seconds to react. He knew that Jeff was thrashing in the driver’s seat, his hands flailing at the steering wheel and his boots jerking and catching the pedals. Ricky’s hands moved instinctively, trying to release the crushing pain in his throat.

He turned helplessly to Jeff and saw that he was being strangled. The cord was buried deep in his throat above the adam’s apple. It was tight enough to pucker the skin around it. Jeff’s face was a mask of pain and shock. He batted uselessly at his assailant. His bulging eyes stared at Ricky and foam drooled down his chin.

Ricky panicked. He was being killed, they were both being killed. They had been going to get fucked up tonight and get their dicks wet. He couldn't be dying. This couldn’t be happening. Ricky screamed in terror but the only sound he could make was a frenzied grunt.

“Shut up,” muttered his killer into his ear, “this ain’t personal. Just tying up the loose ends. Shhhh. It’s almost over.”

It was almost over with Jeff. Despite his overwhelming panic and the progressive damage to his oxygen-deprived brain, Ricky was aware that he was watching Jeff die.

Jeff was convulsing violently in the driver’s seat. His bloodshot eyes gazed into nothing. His dying spasms thrust his pelvis up, his erect cock clearly straining inside his jeans. Spittle trailed from his blackened, swollen tongue.

The sound of death filled the van—the drumming of the victims’ boots against the floorboards, the labored breathing of the hitmen, the faint gagging sounds emerging from clamped-off throats.

Jeff’s body suddenly went rigid, bending backwards and thrusting his hips up. A dark stain formed in his crotch and the writhing of his cock could be seen through his skin-tight jeans. He remained in that position for what seemed like a long time, groin in the air and streams of spunk soaking his jeans, spreading through his pubic hair and onto his thighs.

Jeff went limp. The large dark spot on his jeans grew larger as his bladder emptied. The corpse shuddered in the pool of piss that collected in the seat.

Jeff’s death was the last thing Ricky saw. His vision became obscured by silent fireworks. The insane racing of his heart filled his ears. His tongue was agonizingly huge—it had forced his mouth open and he could feel it protrude. He could still feel lots of things.

He could feel that he was drooling uncontrollably. He could feel snot and tears running down his face. He could feel pain—crushing pain in his throat, burning pain in his chest and a fiery pressure in his engorged cock.

As more of Ricky’s brain shut down, more of his world disappeared. He could see nothing and the pounding in his ears was now a faint and irregular throb.

That’s my heart, he thought in a dim confused way; it’s stopping. Why am I dying? Why is this man killing me?

The pain swallowed him. Darkness and agony rushed over him in a tide. The pain in his throat, the pain in his chest—the pain in his dick.

Then that’s all there was. The final sensation in Ricky’s worthless life was the burning of molten metal as tick gobs of cum erupted from his dick. As his brain shut down and his heart failed, his seed spewed desperately out of his swollen shaft.

The hitman kept the cord cinched tightly around Ricky’s neck for another two minutes. By the time he released the corpse, the death throes had stopped. Ricky was nothing but dead meat soaking in its own piss.

Once the hitmen had removed their cords, they discussed what to do with the bodies. The longer it took to find them, the better. They’d reconnoitered the area thoroughly and knew there was a deep ravine in the woods, several hundred yards to the northwest.

Hoisting the cum-and-piss soaked bodies over their shoulders and carrying them uphill to the ravine was tough. The corpses were dumped in unceremoniously. Jeff stared up with dull glazed eyes from the bottom of the ravine. Ricky lay across him; face down, one arm twisted back behind him.

They were left to bloat and rot. There was a chance they’d be cover with snow soon and wouldn’t be found till spring. There wouldn’t be much left of them by then.

The hitmen drove the van to a spot on the other side of the park and left on the side of the road, keys in the ignition. They had finished “cleaning up.” Time to go…
 
m3mi, what a GREAT story! Always love a good garrotting!!
 
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Seriously, though, just sat down and wrote it out on the spur of the moment. Little vignettes like these are easy; my problem is getting so excited while writing that I end up leaving out details that I'd wanted to include.
 
It hardly reads like it. You have an excellent command of descriptive nuance and flow. You're an excellent author.
 
m3m1, I agree with small_dot. You're excellent. One suggestion. If you're afraid you might have left out some details you wanted to include, wait a day before you post it, and reread the story again. You can always edit in the parts you want to.
 
looked like those two redneck punks had real damn good deaths, the killers treated them fucking right.
 
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