Tecpatl
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Older story I posted on another forum which has disappeared.
Offering to a Dark Angel
Trent had been wandering the dark bathhouse maze for almost an hour. It was starting to seem pointless. One of the pretty boys tried to catch his eye again. But that wasn't what he came here for. At 21, with a smooth muscled body and tousled blond hair, Trent was a pretty boy himself. A pretty boy with a dark fantasy.
He'd seen it online, in the privacy of his room. Boys tied up. Boys beaten. Boys threatened. And now, far away from home, in this dark place, he hoped it would come looking for him. Someone who would take him away. To a darker place.*
Their eyes locked as he brushed past Trent and down a side hall. Trent saw a whorl of tattoos along a scalp under close-cropped dark hair, a strong muscled back covered with more tattoos, and then darkness. Trent's heart skipped a beat as he turned to follow. But the hall branched and he lost the way. He walked faster through the maze. Looking now. Hoping. He saw the stranger cross in the distance. Trent thought their eyes met again. Again he followed. Again only more twinks and old men.
Trent kept looking. And then someone brushed past from behind. He saw the tattoos. The head turned as he reached a corner. The eyes met Trent's. He slowed. A slight smile. And Trent saw him. His chest and arms covered in the tattoos of demons. Or gods. He wondered how far down they went below the towel that wrapped his waist. He felt the ice of fear in his belly. And the heat of desire in his cock. He followed around the corner. Nothing. No one. Darkness.
Until he felt an arm from behind reach around his chest, another around his neck. Trent was pulled tight against a hard body. He felt the brush of an unshaven cheek against his ear. A voice spoke just above the thumping music, "How do you choose to die?"
Trent swallowed hard. His heart was pounding. "I don't . . . I didn't come to . . . "
"To grow old, to waste away, this is not for you." A hand played with Trent's left nipple. There was a slight accent. Eastern Europe maybe. "It is more beautiful to choose."
"Look, I . . . You're crazy, you know . . . I mean, what makes you think?"
The hand left Trent's chest and moved down to grasp the hard cock under his towel. A laugh sounded low.
"This."
"You're not serious."
"Maybe not."
"What do you really want to do to me?"
"Take you home. Tie you up. Lick every part of you."
He was kissing the back of Trent's neck. Trent started to moan.*
"Fuck you. Make you cum."
"Kill me?"
"That would be crazy, no?"
"So you're not really . . ."
"Going to kill you? There is only one time you will know. In the moment when I cut your chest open. Or the moment when I don't."
"Is that what you want to do?"
"It would be a beautiful way. Your heart ripped out like an ancient sacrifice. But we don't always get to do what we want to do."
He ran the backs of his fingers along the side of Trent's face.
"What do you want to do tonight?" he asked.
"I'm . . . I'm not sure."
"The only thing you can be sure of is this moment."
The fingers ran down Trent's neck, his chest, his belly.
"Come with me. And enjoy what happens."
Trent took a deep breath.
"Out the door, turn left. Two streets, then right. My car is dark green. I'll be there in fifteen minutes. You be there . . . Or you will never know."
And he was gone. Trent leaned back against the wall. Fuck! He thought. That couldn't be real. No actual killer would warn a victim. But what a fucking hot role play. Then Trent caught sight of his body in a mirror. He imagined his chest stretched tight like a sacrifice ready for the knife. Fuck.
Kurt was always mildly surprised that there were so many boys who looked for their own doom. He could see it in their eyes. He was surprised at the pretty ones who followed so easily when they were chosen. The last one Kurt had found at a skate park. He chose to be strangled. They talked about it on the long drive to Kurt's small, ordinary house in the outer suburbs. Kurt asked the boy about the most complicated tricks he could do. He asked about the risks, about paralysis, about death. It took time but the boy must always be able to convince himself that the threat wasn't real. He would never admit to himself that it was the threat that drew him. The boy said the thrill of riding was worth the risk, but he had heard a guy came when he was being strangled and that sounded better than years in a wheel chair or death lying on the concrete. He had a friend who tried hanging himself to get off and said it was amazing.*
So Kurt took the boy to bed. It was an ordinary fuck until Kurt put his hands around the boy's neck. The boy put his hands on Kurt's wrists but never tried to push Kurt away. Kurt squeezed and the boy's slim chest arched up against Kurt's own. He relaxed his grip enough to let the boy gasp for air. Then he tightened again. The boy's cock got harder, and his asshole tightened around Kurt's dick. Kurt repeated the process again and again. Waiting in the car, he could still feel the boy's chest struggling for air against his own as he came. That was the time Kurt didn't let go. And as the boy's body relaxed beneath him, Kurt came, his whole body shaking as he shot his load in the boy's ass.
He never knew the boy's name until he saw the picture of a boy gone missing. After a while they gave up looking. But Kurt knew there was nothing left to find. He ran his hand over his chest. All that was left of the boy was now part of Kurt's muscle and bone.
That had been over a year ago. It was time. Kurt hoped the new boy would choose blood. He had finished his tattoos in the last month. And they were thirsty. The door opened and the boy slid in beside him. He reached over and drew the boy's mouth to his. The tongue was willing and sweet. Kurt had to pull away at last. The boy leaned back with a little laugh.
"Whoa!"
"Been a long time?"
"Yeah. I mean I don't"
"Do this much? Are you scared?"
The boy turned to look at him, the eyes searching to learn something.
"Well, yeah, I guess."
"Good. You'd be crazy not to be."
He put his hand against the boy's cheek and looked into his eyes. They were green.
"But you'll be fine. You'll get what you want."
Kurt started the car.
Offering to a Dark Angel
Trent had been wandering the dark bathhouse maze for almost an hour. It was starting to seem pointless. One of the pretty boys tried to catch his eye again. But that wasn't what he came here for. At 21, with a smooth muscled body and tousled blond hair, Trent was a pretty boy himself. A pretty boy with a dark fantasy.
He'd seen it online, in the privacy of his room. Boys tied up. Boys beaten. Boys threatened. And now, far away from home, in this dark place, he hoped it would come looking for him. Someone who would take him away. To a darker place.*
Their eyes locked as he brushed past Trent and down a side hall. Trent saw a whorl of tattoos along a scalp under close-cropped dark hair, a strong muscled back covered with more tattoos, and then darkness. Trent's heart skipped a beat as he turned to follow. But the hall branched and he lost the way. He walked faster through the maze. Looking now. Hoping. He saw the stranger cross in the distance. Trent thought their eyes met again. Again he followed. Again only more twinks and old men.
Trent kept looking. And then someone brushed past from behind. He saw the tattoos. The head turned as he reached a corner. The eyes met Trent's. He slowed. A slight smile. And Trent saw him. His chest and arms covered in the tattoos of demons. Or gods. He wondered how far down they went below the towel that wrapped his waist. He felt the ice of fear in his belly. And the heat of desire in his cock. He followed around the corner. Nothing. No one. Darkness.
Until he felt an arm from behind reach around his chest, another around his neck. Trent was pulled tight against a hard body. He felt the brush of an unshaven cheek against his ear. A voice spoke just above the thumping music, "How do you choose to die?"
Trent swallowed hard. His heart was pounding. "I don't . . . I didn't come to . . . "
"To grow old, to waste away, this is not for you." A hand played with Trent's left nipple. There was a slight accent. Eastern Europe maybe. "It is more beautiful to choose."
"Look, I . . . You're crazy, you know . . . I mean, what makes you think?"
The hand left Trent's chest and moved down to grasp the hard cock under his towel. A laugh sounded low.
"This."
"You're not serious."
"Maybe not."
"What do you really want to do to me?"
"Take you home. Tie you up. Lick every part of you."
He was kissing the back of Trent's neck. Trent started to moan.*
"Fuck you. Make you cum."
"Kill me?"
"That would be crazy, no?"
"So you're not really . . ."
"Going to kill you? There is only one time you will know. In the moment when I cut your chest open. Or the moment when I don't."
"Is that what you want to do?"
"It would be a beautiful way. Your heart ripped out like an ancient sacrifice. But we don't always get to do what we want to do."
He ran the backs of his fingers along the side of Trent's face.
"What do you want to do tonight?" he asked.
"I'm . . . I'm not sure."
"The only thing you can be sure of is this moment."
The fingers ran down Trent's neck, his chest, his belly.
"Come with me. And enjoy what happens."
Trent took a deep breath.
"Out the door, turn left. Two streets, then right. My car is dark green. I'll be there in fifteen minutes. You be there . . . Or you will never know."
And he was gone. Trent leaned back against the wall. Fuck! He thought. That couldn't be real. No actual killer would warn a victim. But what a fucking hot role play. Then Trent caught sight of his body in a mirror. He imagined his chest stretched tight like a sacrifice ready for the knife. Fuck.
Kurt was always mildly surprised that there were so many boys who looked for their own doom. He could see it in their eyes. He was surprised at the pretty ones who followed so easily when they were chosen. The last one Kurt had found at a skate park. He chose to be strangled. They talked about it on the long drive to Kurt's small, ordinary house in the outer suburbs. Kurt asked the boy about the most complicated tricks he could do. He asked about the risks, about paralysis, about death. It took time but the boy must always be able to convince himself that the threat wasn't real. He would never admit to himself that it was the threat that drew him. The boy said the thrill of riding was worth the risk, but he had heard a guy came when he was being strangled and that sounded better than years in a wheel chair or death lying on the concrete. He had a friend who tried hanging himself to get off and said it was amazing.*
So Kurt took the boy to bed. It was an ordinary fuck until Kurt put his hands around the boy's neck. The boy put his hands on Kurt's wrists but never tried to push Kurt away. Kurt squeezed and the boy's slim chest arched up against Kurt's own. He relaxed his grip enough to let the boy gasp for air. Then he tightened again. The boy's cock got harder, and his asshole tightened around Kurt's dick. Kurt repeated the process again and again. Waiting in the car, he could still feel the boy's chest struggling for air against his own as he came. That was the time Kurt didn't let go. And as the boy's body relaxed beneath him, Kurt came, his whole body shaking as he shot his load in the boy's ass.
He never knew the boy's name until he saw the picture of a boy gone missing. After a while they gave up looking. But Kurt knew there was nothing left to find. He ran his hand over his chest. All that was left of the boy was now part of Kurt's muscle and bone.
That had been over a year ago. It was time. Kurt hoped the new boy would choose blood. He had finished his tattoos in the last month. And they were thirsty. The door opened and the boy slid in beside him. He reached over and drew the boy's mouth to his. The tongue was willing and sweet. Kurt had to pull away at last. The boy leaned back with a little laugh.
"Whoa!"
"Been a long time?"
"Yeah. I mean I don't"
"Do this much? Are you scared?"
The boy turned to look at him, the eyes searching to learn something.
"Well, yeah, I guess."
"Good. You'd be crazy not to be."
He put his hand against the boy's cheek and looked into his eyes. They were green.
"But you'll be fine. You'll get what you want."
Kurt started the car.
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