samnitewarrior
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The squad worked its way slowly through the forest, Matt was on point, and following what he thought was a deer trail. The deer were gone now, and they were hunting for Germans.
Frank looked to see that no one was spread out to far. Matt anchored the line, with Willie and Sam just behind him and to his right. Frank was to his left with Tony and Mike covering the right flank. There were Germans scattered throughout the area, mostly scattered from larger units that had been hit hard during the invasion. The Germans left in the woods were battle hardened survivors, looking for payback. Frank checked the platoon to see that everyone was keeping up. He trusted Matt to keep it moving.
The Germans were just up ahead. They had enough time to set up and hide an MG42. Abel, the squad leader, could see shadowy figures moving right toward them. He held his machine pistol at the ready. These soldiers knew they were dead men. They had no chance to get back to their unit. Their last stand would be in the forest. He closely covered the MG team while two others covered the flanks. The MG team knew to hold their fire until they were 50 meters out. The approaching figures kept coming; slow and steadily forward. The MT gunner took careful aim at the man on point. He would be the first to die.
The forest exploded as the MG opened up. Matt didn’t see the MG until the first bullets hit his chest in a tight pattern. He spun around and sprawled onto his back, blood splashing from the big hole in his chest. He opened his mouth as though he was screaming, and squirmed in agony. Blood filled his mouth, and he heard no sound. He choked weakly, and then collapsed, eyes staring into the blue sky above.
Willie moved up firing wildly to help Matt when four rounds stitched across his belly. He grunted loudly and grabbed his gut as he fell. He rolled into a fetal position and used his feet to push himself behind a tree, grasping his wounded belly. All he could feel was blood and chunks of flesh.
Frank and the rest of the platoon dove for cover as soon as the MG opened up. Bullets bounced off trees and filled the air with wood chips and the smell of cordite. He saw Matt get it and heard Willie shout. He could see figures in the woods moving. He yelled for Mike to watch out. Mike turned to fire, but the German already had him in his sights, and squeezed off a round that caught him in the throat. He flopped back, blood spewing from his wound. Tony took aim and fired. The German threw his hands up as the bullets split his ribs and tore into his chest. He dropped to the ground dead.
Frank signaled for Tony to head toward to where the dead soldier just fell. Frank headed to the right. They had to kill the MG team if they expected to survive. He crawled by Matt’s blood covered body, and told Willie to hold on and kept moving.
The MG opened up again. Both soldiers stayed down. Frank heard the report of a rifle and heard the round bounce off the tree he was behind. He could hear some one approaching his position. He looked up and saw the German 10 yards from him. He spun his Thompson around and threw himself flat on the ground, firing upward into the German’s guts. The German dropped his weapon and grabbed his belly, groaned and fell face first to the ground.
Tony pulled a grenade our and pulled the pin. As he rose up to throw it, Abel opened up with his weapon. Tony screamed as a half a dozen bullets stitched up his back and blasted out of his chest. The grenade fell from his hand, and he fell beside it. The explosion tore him to pieces.
Frank saw tony get it. He pulled a grenade and flipped it toward the MG nest. He heard screaming as the grenade went off, followed by silence. He kept moving, looking for more Germans. Through the woods, he saw an outline and ducked just as a burst from a machine pistol tore up the trees around him. He rolled to the right. The shadow moved through the forest and he fired again, missing this time. Frank popped up and squeezed a burst of fire. Abel grabbed his belly, staggered forward a few steps and fell. He was still alive. The last thing he saw was Frank standing over him, his Thompson pointed at his chest. Frank double tabbed him. Abel arched up slightly, trying to scream, but no sound came from his mouth as he fell back dead.
Frank walked to the MG nest. One of the mangled bodies spoke softly. “Bitte.” Frank put one into his head. Willie moaned loudly, and Frank ran to him.
Willie was on his back when Frank got to him. He gasped loudly as Frank pulled his hands away. He took one look and put them back. Will grabbed his wounds even harder.
“How’s it look,” he asked.
“Sorry Willie.”
Wille could feel his cock stiffen. “Can you help me out … down there?” Frank looked at the bulge in his pants. He took his hand and began to massage Willies cock. Willie began to moan, louder and louder. Suddenly he groaned and arched his back. Frank could feel Willies cock spasm. When is stopped, Willie fell still, hands falling to his side. Frank hoped someone would help him like that when he got it.
The squad worked its way slowly through the forest, Matt was on point, and following what he thought was a deer trail. The deer were gone now, and they were hunting for Germans.
Frank looked to see that no one was spread out to far. Matt anchored the line, with Willie and Sam just behind him and to his right. Frank was to his left with Tony and Mike covering the right flank. There were Germans scattered throughout the area, mostly scattered from larger units that had been hit hard during the invasion. The Germans left in the woods were battle hardened survivors, looking for payback. Frank checked the platoon to see that everyone was keeping up. He trusted Matt to keep it moving.
The Germans were just up ahead. They had enough time to set up and hide an MG42. Abel, the squad leader, could see shadowy figures moving right toward them. He held his machine pistol at the ready. These soldiers knew they were dead men. They had no chance to get back to their unit. Their last stand would be in the forest. He closely covered the MG team while two others covered the flanks. The MG team knew to hold their fire until they were 50 meters out. The approaching figures kept coming; slow and steadily forward. The MT gunner took careful aim at the man on point. He would be the first to die.
The forest exploded as the MG opened up. Matt didn’t see the MG until the first bullets hit his chest in a tight pattern. He spun around and sprawled onto his back, blood splashing from the big hole in his chest. He opened his mouth as though he was screaming, and squirmed in agony. Blood filled his mouth, and he heard no sound. He choked weakly, and then collapsed, eyes staring into the blue sky above.
Willie moved up firing wildly to help Matt when four rounds stitched across his belly. He grunted loudly and grabbed his gut as he fell. He rolled into a fetal position and used his feet to push himself behind a tree, grasping his wounded belly. All he could feel was blood and chunks of flesh.
Frank and the rest of the platoon dove for cover as soon as the MG opened up. Bullets bounced off trees and filled the air with wood chips and the smell of cordite. He saw Matt get it and heard Willie shout. He could see figures in the woods moving. He yelled for Mike to watch out. Mike turned to fire, but the German already had him in his sights, and squeezed off a round that caught him in the throat. He flopped back, blood spewing from his wound. Tony took aim and fired. The German threw his hands up as the bullets split his ribs and tore into his chest. He dropped to the ground dead.
Frank signaled for Tony to head toward to where the dead soldier just fell. Frank headed to the right. They had to kill the MG team if they expected to survive. He crawled by Matt’s blood covered body, and told Willie to hold on and kept moving.
The MG opened up again. Both soldiers stayed down. Frank heard the report of a rifle and heard the round bounce off the tree he was behind. He could hear some one approaching his position. He looked up and saw the German 10 yards from him. He spun his Thompson around and threw himself flat on the ground, firing upward into the German’s guts. The German dropped his weapon and grabbed his belly, groaned and fell face first to the ground.
Tony pulled a grenade our and pulled the pin. As he rose up to throw it, Abel opened up with his weapon. Tony screamed as a half a dozen bullets stitched up his back and blasted out of his chest. The grenade fell from his hand, and he fell beside it. The explosion tore him to pieces.
Frank saw tony get it. He pulled a grenade and flipped it toward the MG nest. He heard screaming as the grenade went off, followed by silence. He kept moving, looking for more Germans. Through the woods, he saw an outline and ducked just as a burst from a machine pistol tore up the trees around him. He rolled to the right. The shadow moved through the forest and he fired again, missing this time. Frank popped up and squeezed a burst of fire. Abel grabbed his belly, staggered forward a few steps and fell. He was still alive. The last thing he saw was Frank standing over him, his Thompson pointed at his chest. Frank double tabbed him. Abel arched up slightly, trying to scream, but no sound came from his mouth as he fell back dead.
Frank walked to the MG nest. One of the mangled bodies spoke softly. “Bitte.” Frank put one into his head. Willie moaned loudly, and Frank ran to him.
Willie was on his back when Frank got to him. He gasped loudly as Frank pulled his hands away. He took one look and put them back. Will grabbed his wounds even harder.
“How’s it look,” he asked.
“Sorry Willie.”
Wille could feel his cock stiffen. “Can you help me out … down there?” Frank looked at the bulge in his pants. He took his hand and began to massage Willies cock. Willie began to moan, louder and louder. Suddenly he groaned and arched his back. Frank could feel Willies cock spasm. When is stopped, Willie fell still, hands falling to his side. Frank hoped someone would help him like that when he got it.