Sham3

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Hey,

I've been thinking of writing a fantasy story on this site set in a medieval world where those who die between the ages of 16 and 40 do not decay, or lose their warmth depending on the temperature. When slain, instead of feeling pain the mortal wound gives them pleasure instead, and it is said that their souls do not leave their bodies, and are well aware of what is happening even after death. It is a world constantly in a state of warfare, where armies of men and youths between the ages of 18 and 40 fight each other.

Attire for soldiers consist of leather trousers, a belt, boots, scabbards for weapons, and a smooth short sleeve tunic typically woven from the cotton plant that is worn by those from wealthy families (otherwise, you have to wear nothing upperbody wise besides something to hold your weapon, and you have to have your body shaven). What happens to your body after death depends on how you lived your life. Those who managed to kill no one are given paupers' graves, whereas renowned warriors are entombed. The greatest honour however goes to the hero of the village, the warrior whose actions shine out any other. His body is laid out on display in the village's shrine, where many may flock to see and caress. Most men strive to become the heroes of their village, by killing the most opponents and dying as soon as possible, hence the phrase "Kill many, Die young." An important deity of this world is Aros, god of war and sex, depicted as a naked, muscular man holding a sword. Young men are sacrificed to him every year in tournaments, their bodies laid out on nine altars in Aros' temples with their dicks out and erected, with the winner of the tournament on the front altar regularly bathed in the 'cum' of Aros that spouts from the penis of his statue.

If anyone is interested please let me know and I might go into further detail.
 
sounds interesting with lots of possibilities, give it a go is my comment . Thanks for giving us the general Theme
 
So it';s nice to see that some poeple responded to this post. So here's the thing. I'm thinking of having 9 characters to feature in this story. So if anyone has any idea as to what they should look like (built, hair colour, eye colour, shirtless, etc) pleasure let ne know
 
Nice idea - the soul staying in the body - rather than going to paradise or oblivion as the choices most soldiers face as possibilities. Have the men from the northern village in the mountains wear an earthen coloured plain kilt to fight in :-) and maybe the cum of Aros should be the seed collected from the freshly slain warriors.
 
Write it! This is an excellent idea. I'll help if you want it.
 
Okay,

So here is my idea for the nine main characters. All start off as youths in the same village and have the same birthday, and have begun their training as warriors. The nine characters are as follows:

Albus

Build: medium.

Hair colour: blond.

Eye colour: grey.

tunic: white.

preferred choice of weapon: spear.

Background: A prince of the village, member of the royal house. The wealthiest and most popular boy in the village.

personality: considered to be pure of heat, Albus has a clear sense of right and wrong.


Flavius

Build: slim

hair colour: blond

eye colour: amber

tunic: yellow.

preferred choice of weapon: sword

background: nobility. Albus' best friend. Considered to be the most handsome boy in the village.

personality: cheerful, has a passion for life.



Niger

Build: medium.

Hair colour: black.

eye colour: black.

tunic: black

preferred weapon of choice: dagger.

background: Member of the leading middle class family. Albus' arch rival. Unpopular, considered to be the bad boy of the village.

personality: Loner, shy.


Grisius

Build: medium

hair colour: black

eye colour: grey

tunic: grey

preferred weapon of choice: whip.

background: middle class. Niger's best friend.

personality: depressed. obsessed with death.


Viridius:

build: medium (but with a prominent chest)

hair colour: brown

Eye colour: green

tunic: green.

preferred weapon of choice: mace

background: noble.

personality: has a compassion for life.


Rufus

build: muscular

hair colour: red (also has a beard)

eye colour: amber

tunic: red

preferred weapon of choice: axe.

background: nobleman. friend of Flavius

personality: hot-headed. eager for battle.


Caeruleus

build: lean

hair colour: blond

eye colour: blue

tunic: blue

preferred weapon of choice: trident

background: noble

personality: emotional. quick to have tears.


Brunicus

build: fairly muscular

hair colour: brown.

eye colour: brown

tunic: brown.

preferred weapon of choice: club.

background: middle class.

personality: humble, but eager to prove himself on the battlefield.


Tunicanon

build: muscular

hair colour: red.

eye colour: grey.

tunic: shirtless

preferred weapon of choice: hand-to-hand combat.

background: member of the peasant class. considered to be the strongest boy in the village.

personality: has a tough guy attitude on life.


the story will follow these nine on their journey to become renowned heroes.

Watch how they live. And watch how they die.
 
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