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Hi readers,

Just want to find out what future ideas you might want to see in the above story.

I have a cruise story in line, and a road trip in the US for the two of them, I'm also thinking of more ideas for both Scott and Adam, and also for Scott to work on alone.

But thought what you guys would like to see. I try to use as many as the ideas as possible

Feel free to submit your ideas.
 
They should visit a summer camp on their American road trip and kill some hot muscular camp councillors. Friday the 13th style. Maybe they could meet a fellow serial killer.

They could also open their own gym chain. A great supply of hot guys.
 
Random ideas:
- Bagging
- Cock choke
- rape while holding the victim's head underwater

In terms of things I personally would like to see though I love how on his first vacation he made it look like his victim died accidentally during a sex game... Or that time in the park when he murderer the guy while adam was saving the drowning girl. Would be great to see another "accident".
 
let them take nice holiday on a cruise ship

-some soldiers
-some hot guests
-some sailors
-and of course the very special "captains" dinner
 
More ideas:

- Hoping to see a little more necro action, particularly with some of the hotter victims. Scott (or anyone else) rarely has sex with them after they're dead, usually limiting himself to oral, even though he often comments on how hot their corpses are. It is important to have sex be an occasional treat b/c it preserves the surprise element, but it's so often that he finds them attractive and so rare that he actually does anything about it that i find myself asking "well what's stopping you?"

- This is a version of "drown the victim while fucking him" that fits well with the cruise storyline. Imagine if Scott & Adam went scuba diving and snatch a hot stud while he's out swimming. They could pull him down and rape him while he's struggling for air, and remain virtually undetected - especially if they attached diving weights to his body after he's dead so he never resurfaces. If you've ever wrestled someone underwater, you know how hard it can be. Some inspiration: Anak and the creature from the black lagoon

- On the cruise they could keelhaul someone to finish him off or soften him up. Imagine some combination of these kalabro works: Propellers and Peril and Time keeps on Slipping...

- Scott and Adam might suddenly find themselves in need of hushing someone up quickly - perhaps to move on to the victim's boyfriend or the other three guys in the orgy? - and a screwdriver through the ear, slit throat, heart stab, or prolonged choke hold are good ways of accomplishing that, although some of these methods either work only in the shower or a lot of cleanup is necessary. References: The Beautiful Stranger III and Demolition Daddy III

edit: forgot to respond to troythunder - you're basically describing Dead Boyz Don't Scream, and I definitely approve.
 
thanks for ideas and feedback.
i like to hear it, keep it coming thanks
 
The stories "Death on the Rhine" and "Death in Key West" by habu both contain boat segments you might be able to use as inspiration. He's not a snuff author, though, so it was incredibly frustrating to see him carefully set up dozens of excellent scenarios for deaths and either never pay them off, or do so off screen. For example, stalking a hot sailor through a machine room, using the noise as cover and stashing the body in the shadows. Meeting a svelte twink in the tiny ship's gym late at night, hitting it off, having a brief romantic quickie while hoping nobody comes by, his hands erotically tied to the treadmill... and then while he's moaning with satisfaction, injecting him with an OD level of cocaine or meth and sitting back to watch the show. Or possibly taking a guided tour while on a port-of-call to see some caves or large ruins or something like that, catching the eye of a student who's traveling alone, sneaking away together for a clandestine roll in the hay... then halfway through fucking him hook both his arms back by the elbow and push his face into a pond or fountain. Pull him up by the hair every so often - don't want him to die before he's completely used up. With so many dark pits and caverns, no one ever finds his body.

Also, have you ever heard of plastination? Scott seems to be getting by just fine with just a freezer, and the plastination of reality is obviously too much trouble, but as can be seen in this story, it can be pretty fun in fiction.
 
Throwing it out there to the readers.
I'm looking for ideas on how Scott can have fun disposing guys on his holidays.
Looking for ideas in the following areas.
1. Gay cruise
2. Road trip in US.
3. A wrestling camp in US

Also feel free to submit normal ideas

Thanks.
 
i wrote you a normal idea with some pics of a guy who could be the perfect victim to that treatment... you didn't answered me, did you received it?
 
this is what i wrote you :)

hi! i have another suggest for you, hope you'll like it :)

Scott is now a pool instructor and he wants to teach to an hot guy how to hold his breath more. Scott has to hold the guy underwater, belly-up, with the right hand on the guy's belly and the other around his head, holding his arms raised, the pact is that scott have to let the guy go when he'll do a signal, he does for twice, but the third time he continue holding the guy underwater, scott tickle the guy's armpits and belly more times, he also make the guy rotate in the water to confuse him. when the guy starts to spasm he push his belly and hold his mouth opened to make him drown better. The important is that scott have to make a lot of test to the body, to be sure he is really drowned, and then to leave him underwater, as if it was an accident :)

i'm sure it'll be hot if made of you :)

hope you'll like it

and this is the model i would love to see :) http://www.myspace.com/andreanicotra/photos/albums/le-mie-foto/339661
 
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