hard to say, i liked sa and the twins a lot but drew and matt where nice as well. as you know i love your story. I really can't say which one was best....
 
I have enjoyed most of the kills, especially the burglars and the twins. As for the future, besides the suggestions I already made, I think the most interesting dynamic will be that between Adam and Scott. Eventually, Adam must either suspect or KNOW that Scott is the murderer. The question is what will Adam do with that knowledge. Will his love for Scott overcome his dedication as a police detective?
 
Thanks for the feedback for the above story.

The question i keep getting asked is whats the plan with adam.

I have a good idea in mind, and wont spoil it
But what do readers want to happen to him.

1. Should he come over to the darkside.
2. Scott finishes him off.
Or
3. Will he uphold the law to the hilt.
 
I'm not sure. But I see the choices as only #1 or #3 for Adam. If he chooses choice 3, then Scott is forced into choice #2 as a reaction. Or at least an attempt at choice #2.
 
For me, it might be most interesting to see what would happen in the story line if mr white shine adam is already on the dark side and scott and us simply don't know yet. a bit like the fireworkers who likes to burn down houses and set other peoples property on fire.

There are tons of options how scott could find that out. maybe he decides on a vic and discovers he is not the only hunter... adam acidently finding things in the pig pen or the animal center etc...

I would love to see where that leads us to but waiting for your discisions is half the fun so far.
 
Thanks for your ideas. Keep them and your feedback coming.

I think you'll enjoy the Adam storyline when he finally finds out.
 
Thanks for the feedback for the above story.

The question i keep getting asked is whats the plan with adam.

I have a good idea in mind, and wont spoil it
But what do readers want to happen to him.


1. Should he come over to the darkside.
2. Scott finishes him off.
Or
3. Will he uphold the law to the hilt.

I would love to see Adam strugling between his dark desires and his moral convictions, and see him joining Scott in the end. Fucking and killing keeps couples together :-)
 
i've already sent you (private) suggest for a new murder ;) i can't wait to see it realized :P
 
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