Submitting a draft screen from a screenplay I am working on am asking for some feedback to see audience reaction.
Scene 5 : Small Talk
[Dante wakes up, his eyes hurting from the bright light and as his eyes adjust to the brightens he realizes he is on a bed, and the room he is in is roughly 8...
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(Submitting this scene for my screenplay for some feedback, need to know if I am hitting the right tempo)
Scene 4: Beginnings
[Camera focuses on bathroom door, noises of shower can be heard through it, there is a fleeting shadow passing the door, seconds later the bathroom door opens and...
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Still looking for real time KO Doms or Versatile guys into KO Play/Scenes using chems and meds.
Can travel, arrange hotel play as needed. U.S., Canada and UK.
Texas here.
I called out, "Number 27."
"Yes sir, Ryken Davies here."
Bingo! He was the cool surfer casually fondling himself on the far side of the waiting room. I hoped for this assignment from the moment I saw him in the waiting room. According to his contract he was twenty-two years and six...
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Here are best buds Chad and Jake horsing around, knocking each other out, and strangling each other. This is a preview "teaser" to a much longer video for sale on BestDeaths.com this week.... Hope you enjoy the show....
What do you guys think of Chad and Jake?.......
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Executioners club
I look out at the approaching semi truck with the other members of the executioners club, each of us in whatever gear we will most likely wear when we hang our condemned, most of the batch coming are just toughs off the street, aint no use for nobody but us and the lawmen...
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A while ago I saw a post, either here or in another forum, about Russian Roulette. It could be a revolver or short drop where the noose might release your neck after a few seconds, or electric chair with full voltage or just a small voltage that you wouldn't detect for five seconds that it's...
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These two young vietnamese kids were tried in April 2011 for robbing and killing a government official in 2010. They had been caught red-handed and after a 2 day trial were both sentenced to DEATH, although the prosecution had asked for the younger one(in the short sleeved shirt which is not...
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It was very late at night and the nice old man parked his car and then went into his house. He was weary.. another long day and more men who need advice on drug and alcohol abuse. So many men so many men .... Well the day is almost over and he will watch the news for a few minutes before he goes...
Originally published in New Scientist
Drowning
The "surface struggle" for breath
Death by drowning has a certain dark romance to it: countless literary heroines have met their end slipping beneath the waves with billowy layers of petticoats floating around their heads. In reality...
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Anyone know the best way to knock out someone? The fantasy is drug him, fuck him on camera, and show him when he wakes up. He agrees, too, just don't know a good way to actually DO it.
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Joseph Paul Jernigan broke into a house and then beat, stabbed, and shot a man to death. He was convicted of murder and sentenced to die by lethal injection. Jernigan decided to donate his body to science. After his execution, his body was used as part of the Visible Human Project. His body was...
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Okay guys, here are some videos from my collection. Since my two YT channels (LeatherDwarf and AETroll) got deleted by some moralists, I'm gonna put some vids here. Let's hope they stay there for a while. They're all from normal non-porn/fetish movies. Hope you enjoy.
ASP First one is a...
Since we all here are deeply entangled with death, I was curious to know what people here think about capital punishment...are you in favor or against it?
My opinion: I am a huge lib when it comes to this kind of thing. In as much as I think there is something erotic about death, I do not...
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This story is an attempt at modifying photos. I only have MS Paint to modify with. I have just posted it as a bit of fun to see how it turns out. :tongue:
War was sleeping peacefully at home.
A figure was watching him sleep. His evil intent made him hard.
War rolled over and settled. His...
Sorry I haven't posted for a while. A real-life health scare got in the way! At one stage, I thought I was going to become a corpse, as in one death rattle coming up! All this got me to thinking about what I wanted to happen to my dead, stiff cadaver, and I came up with the following.
Firstly...
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