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    Hello Rick!

    In meat You still tell a story from the perspective of feet, ants and grass but Your imagery becomes heavier it is rancid, odors and things stinks.
    You are now also talking to the politicians and masses, it is no longer a lover or a hankering neighbor that You talk to.
    The theme is no longer lust and yearning but grand calamities and prophecies of some thing threatening that is going to happen.

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    The closing verse of the first poem is wonderful:

    "and i swear that i can still taste him
    i swear that i can still see
    but i swear that I'd only kill you
    if i never take it out of me"

    As for "ROTTING", it's full of pent-up emotion. It's like a pressure cooker building up steam towards an explosion...but never quite blowing.
    "I'm always mystified to see grown men scrubbing their hands as if they are about to perform open-heart surgery after urinating in New Jersey Turnpike rest stop bathrooms. Did they piss all over their hands at the urinal? Didn't they already wash their penises that morning in the shower? How does your unit get dirty by aiming a stream of urine into the proper receptacle?"..John Waters, Role Models

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    LOL! Pure "smelly" poetry ;)
    - All men must die -

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    Yes it is smelly like Les Fleurs du mal heavy and pungent images like Baroque era poetry full of death.

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    I'm glad your all entertained!
    my cock exists for male feet/soles!!!

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    BACK TO MY ADDICTION, THE FEET!!!!!!


    you give me foot and kisses
    i give you a ton of love
    a blowjob, maybe two
    you masturbate me with your twinkle toes
    orgasm takes us where the wild goose goes
    firm as a rock, our love's build on feet, big balls and cock

    you're feet massage my cheeks, my lips, my nose
    our dicks get really happy and it shows
    bare soles are dancing on my heart's glass ceiling
    naked soles silhouettes leave senses reeling
    let's misbehave!
    barefoot me dude!
    i want to be your slave

    say i am a bunch of grapes and stomp me silly
    pound me with loving soles, i mean it, really!
    i'll gag and gurgle, while you whack me merrily, loving the toes that puncture me verily
    between your toes i read my destiny in lyric prose

    rescue cool words from prude paralysis
    put back the anal in analysis
    let your big toe deflower a virgin hole and give my mouth visions of your sole
    who knows? with luck heaven may be a long barefoot fuck
    my cock exists for male feet/soles!!!

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    Dirty talk always has excited me, but your RHYMING dirty talk gives me one hell of a jumping and juicing boner. The trouble is, you can't recite your poetry while sucking.
    "I'm always mystified to see grown men scrubbing their hands as if they are about to perform open-heart surgery after urinating in New Jersey Turnpike rest stop bathrooms. Did they piss all over their hands at the urinal? Didn't they already wash their penises that morning in the shower? How does your unit get dirty by aiming a stream of urine into the proper receptacle?"..John Waters, Role Models

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    It’s clear that you write from you’re soul, and that is exciting to see.
    Thanks for starting this corner, your writing fills us with glee.

    The only thing better, and it would be neat.
    Would be living your words while lying at your feet.

    Thanks for sharing my dear.

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    awwww, you dudes are GREAT!!!!
    my cock exists for male feet/soles!!!

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    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Such amazing skill with prose and verse,
    I have so seldom ever observed
    And hardly now can be at all reserved.

    So outright I must openly say
    Such a magnificent feat beyond all feet,
    of masculine bod, of spirit and sole-filled meat.

    Such a soul beyond all soles we have never read before,
    So on his deft way is StustustuGOO Rick
    To becoming our CDG Shakespearian most esteemed gift.



    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


    Opening speech from

    Richard III
    by
    William Shakespeare



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