Great concept. I like the allusion to tribal customs where the severed head of an enemy is used for sport. Creating a cause and effect connection between the ejaculation of the doomed rugger and his beheading is a beautiful depiction of deathsex, and the story leaves the reader with tantalizing indications that the guillotine will be used on other naked jocks before the match has finished. I wish I'd run across your post sooner.
 
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