Dunno when/if the OP plans to post the rest of the story, so I'll post the link to it, and some other excellent ones, here:
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/author.php?authorid=937
I never liked second person narrative, because it always came off as distracting and unnecessary. But somehow you really made it work in this story; it fits so naturally. I don't know how this story works so well, but it's so immersive and just the right details are assembled so engagingly...
Several of the members of the US men's Olympic team have commented that they would prefer shirtless uniforms. For various reasons, but one of them definitely being "we look amazing and it would be fun to show off."
Here's hoping for the 2020 Olympics...
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:
If you are reading this then I am beyond all fear of earthly consequence, and it is only just that I try to make things right. While I’ve never deliberately harmed another, I have nevertheless allowed fear - and, in truth, selfish desire - to delay the revelation of...
I'm a huge fan of Jason's stories. (link) Even thinking about them makes my heart race. Some of them seem to imply that there are more entries, ("AKA and the Ice Skater", perhaps?) but I've never been able to find any. People have asked for them on this forum before with no results, but I wonder...
Immediately check behind me. It's obviously a distraction set up by the chinchilla mafia.
Stay safe, everybody! Small rodents in business suits are disarmingly cute. OPERATIVE WORD "DISARMING".
For reals.